Trials, Chapter One

Evelos, a wuyon'mar elf, is almost unseated from his charger (unicorn). His mother, Mirium, admonishes him. Evelos winces as he hears the greeting of his father, Keelath, as the older 'mar enters from the main gate.
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Transcript*

Mirium: Straighten him up! Don’t let him get away with that! Outside rein! No, no, no…

Mirium: What happened?

Evelos: He wouldn’t listen!

Mirium: You have to be confident and follow through with your commands!

Evelos: But I…

Evelos: I don’t think I’m cut out for this…

Mirium: Oh, Evelos! A charger is a friend for life, but you have to respect each other.

Fleet: *snort!*

Mirium: Isn’t that right, Carrot-Brain?

Fleet: *nicker*

Keelath: Hallo!

Mirium: That would be your father. He’ll want to see your progress–Evelos?

Evelos: …

*(For those who can’t read my atrocious handwriting.)

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